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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-01-03 07:21 PM


Where did it begin?
With her
She did it
She gave the
juicy news to him
they were naked
and then they knew
lust and jealousy


LGR(C)1/3/12

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-01-03 07:51 PM


Whoa!! Short and in your face . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2012-01-03 08:34 PM


Yep, you said it girl.


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2012-01-03 10:34 PM


I try to call 'em as I see 'em...


Lori

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