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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-01-01 12:17 PM



Found a new station
plays my favorite
rock me tunes
It makes me move
to beats that echo
from my very soul
It makes me move
my shoulders
and pulls me
from my seat
Shakin' it loose
in the garage
Getting' down and dirty
in the dining room
Groovin' with my dishes
Gonna dance my caboose away

LGR(C)1/1/12



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-01-01 12:23 PM


Hah! I can just see you rocking with the beat. Love to be a fly on the wall for this performance. Letsssss Rrrrock!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

bel1e
Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

2 posted 2012-01-01 12:37 PM


Sweet poem!

             

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2012-01-01 01:00 PM


Ha! Fat chance Jerry (pun intended)

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Thanks Baby Girl!

Lori


jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2012-01-01 03:13 PM


Back in the day, when cabooses were common, you could jump up on the tracks just after they passed and watch them sway back and forth as they as they danced down the track....then I read this and ... well, what a vision . . .

LOL

j.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2012-01-01 03:21 PM


LOL!!
Had me in tears with laughter.
This is so cute!

Nice one, Lori.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Nicole
Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
6 posted 2012-01-01 05:00 PM


Musical abandon, gotta love it!  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2012-01-01 05:24 PM


J,JL and Nicole, Thanks for getting on board with this one!

Lori

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