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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-12-31 08:29 AM

I remember sweating
body a mass of hurt
knees were bloodied
ripped on linoleum
that's all I remember
no recall of the event
except for whip-cracks
my scream, my scream
at the savagery of it all
my passion, your rage
madwoman of 5th St.
did you ride me down

©December 28, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2011-12-31 08:34 AM

Good gracious, Jerry. You drew me in with the title; and then reading this was like taking a shot of whiskey. One hot quick fire, that's still burning in my belly.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-12-31 08:41 AM

Haha! Thank you for your great response to the Madwoman of 5th Street, Nicole. Gotta love it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-12-31 10:20 AM

This hurts to the core Jerry, bless your heart.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-12-31 10:30 AM

Good Morning Birthday Girl. Good to see you here . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2011-12-31 12:35 PM

wow. fire & brimstone man...!!!! even my keyboard is smoking.....

LOL

XOXO

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

6 posted 2011-12-31 12:38 PM

P.S. I think I know her!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2011-12-31 12:52 PM

Thanks, Baby Girl. If you know her please don't tell her where I am.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

8 posted 2011-12-31 12:59 PM

LOL your secret is safe with me, Mr. Pat!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2011-12-31 01:11 PM

Whew! Baby Girl.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2012-01-04 10:53 PM

Jerry is she hiding in your closet?
Don't forget to look under
your bed before you sack-out.
At the end I was hoping for more scenes
from this madwoman of 5th St.
She seems so feisty.

Enjoyed the read, Jerry!!
So back to the top...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2012-01-04 10:56 PM

Wow! JL, you scoured deep to find this one, thanks for reviving it. Haha . . . Uh, yeah, I checked all the right places. Don't think I could go another round with her.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

12 posted 2012-01-05 04:31 AM

....lol enjoyed the poem and the replies

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

13 posted 2012-01-05 06:05 AM

Hello, glad you liked my poetry this morning.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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