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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-12-31 08:27 AM

you were like virgin shoes dancing innocent
under the falling of eros arrows storming
shot into the air by those voyeur men bows

the sounds of their release was pleasing
you said it was a musical seduction
pulling your lady like apart, wounded, open

and that after there was always empty inside
with more entering almost too quickly
til you were wearing only your agony again

but you found my eyes had partial healing
so you impaled your restlessness within them
taking your fill of my whispered pricking

as you strummed my killing song, so softly

____________

daark

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2011-12-31 08:31 AM

I've always liked your words, how they feel and sound when read out loud. There's such a musical quality to the lilt of them. I'll admit, that I am not the brightest star - and terribly obtuse...so I never really know how to reply. Thought I'd give it a shot with this one.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-12-31 08:34 AM

ms Nicole..my eyes are always closed when I read the replies...so the brightness is mute..just the texture of your smile is pleasing to my finger glances...thank you ms

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2011-12-31 11:29 AM

Hey you! As always there is a treasure within your lines~~ hope this past year has been good to you and this next one even better...

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-12-31 11:35 AM

Ms MMs, and to you too lady, thanks

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2011-12-31 12:26 PM

~No better way to die~*~*that's for sure~*~

~a Blessed 2012 to you, daddy~*~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-12-31 12:29 PM

BBBel1e thanks babe...you too.

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2011-12-31 03:25 PM

Enjoying your words Daark.
Ms E

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2012-01-01 07:21 AM

Ms E, thank you

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