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Another Day, Another Year

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


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Another day, another year
global warming missing here...
Some days reflect the once upons
the midnight blues, the keeping on.

What little time, the insecure,
the weaving words, the want of more
of attic thoughts saved from the past
kept in the heart, their need to last.

Sighing moments devoted to
the prelude of tomorrow's new
to lessen then the sting of gloom
escaping to a waiting room

where dreams will bathe to occupy
and fill the hollow through mind's eye,
remembering the all of all
on this the day before night's fall.

Wishing for the new to be
real and not illusory~~~
M
(thank you to all the pip friends for
using many of your recent titles
as inspiration)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Nicole
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1 posted 12-31-2011 08:22 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

This is so cleverly written, and flows so easily.  I LOVE this   Thank you for posting it.
JerryPat2
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2 posted 12-31-2011 08:38 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

"Wishing for the new to be
real and not illusory~~~"

Yes, to those lines, my friend. This time tomorrow we will begin our journey through 2012. What will it hold for us, only time will tell.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
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3 posted 12-31-2011 09:09 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Your special touch very evident here, my friend...cleverly and well done...

j.
Paul Wilson
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4 posted 12-31-2011 10:17 AM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Maureen...I must say this was very smoothly written and enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


5 posted 12-31-2011 11:27 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Thanks everyone...I have been so tired out lately, I haven't been able to think enough to post anything new so I am always grateful when I can be inspired by other's titles or thoughts.

Wishing everyone a  wonderful and safe New Years ( I probably won't be able to stay awake long enough to see it in )


M
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6 posted 12-31-2011 06:49 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

wonderful writing as always

Gloom
JL
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7 posted 12-31-2011 07:39 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

"What little time, the insecure,
the weaving words, the want of more
of attic thoughts saved from the past
kept in the heart, their need to last."

Absolutely!
Love this verse best, the entire write is great, but I can relate to this, for sure.

Happy New Year!!

JL
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 12-31-2011 08:45 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

interesting 'write' !
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9 posted 12-31-2011 09:31 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Well done, Ms M.
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 01-02-2012 04:18 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Thanks, again~~  wishing everyone a Happy New Year.


M
Michael
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11 posted 01-03-2012 03:41 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Great write... Liked it before I realized where you drew the inspiration.  Fantastic job.

Michael
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12 posted 01-04-2012 05:16 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

absolutely gorgeous, you have well and truly been inspired - loved your work here, well done.
~hugs~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                         W. E. Channing


Margherita
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13 posted 01-04-2012 02:38 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I find your creativity amazing, dear Maureen, it all is woven together so perfectly well. Beautiful inspiration!

Happy New Year to you too!

Love and joy.
Margherita
latearrival
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14 posted 01-05-2012 12:08 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

Maureen,I always find your thoughts interesting and orginal. Enjoyed this one as well. Good to see you posting.jo
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     Reminded me warmly of Auden.  I really enjoyed the sense of delving and playfulness here and the groundedness in the tradition.  I think you had a typo of attic for antic, but that may just be me.  Just wonderful; thanks so much. It really raised my spirits.  Best wishes.  Bob Kaven
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16 posted 01-05-2012 10:29 PM       View Profile for Oklahoma Rose   Email Oklahoma Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Oklahoma Rose

Yes it is! Just another day, and another year.
hoot_owl_rn
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Love the flow and rhyme of this piece. There is much read here between the lines.

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

nakdthoughts
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18 posted 01-07-2012 07:39 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Good Morning and  thank you to each  of you.

And Ruth I always try to leave a little between the lines. Happy Birthday to you.

M
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oh, so nice to read you again
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