Life's Sonnet #63 - Inhale Me

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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-12-27 07:34 AM

She said she wanted me to inhale her,
I didn't know what that meant at the time,
I thought to sniff her perfume as she purred,
But what she wanted of me was sublime.
Her words touched me as if pushed by a wind,
Floating on currents straight into my heart,
It was as if she were there and with a grin,
Giving me her loving, all a la carte.
Her voice had a deep sound around my eyes,
Inhale me she whispered one more time,
Stood there with a whimsical and soft sigh,
I understood and breathed in all her prime.

That's when my inner self began to glow,
Breathing her quintessence made my heart grow.

©December 26, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-27 08:49 AM

Exquisitely written, Jerry! You have rendered the "inhaling" in a most captivating way.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-12-27 09:01 AM

Much love goes out to you this second day of the Christmas Season, Margherita, and thank you profusely for your nice comments . . .

You have two choices in life:
You can stay single and be miserable,
or get married and wish you were dead.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2011-12-27 10:14 AM

Her words touched me as if pushed by a wind,
Floating on currents straight into my heart,

And your words floated right into mine... this is beautiful!!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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4 posted 2011-12-27 11:06 AM

Thank you, suthern, for the lovely comment.

You have two choices in life:
You can stay single and be miserable,
or get married and wish you were dead.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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5 posted 2011-12-27 11:44 AM

Your romantic writings are quite wonderful Jerry! I'm very happy for you my friend

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-12-27 01:22 PM

Thanks, Lori.

You have two choices in life:
You can stay single and be miserable,
or get married and wish you were dead.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2011-12-28 12:47 PM

"But what she wanted of me was sublime.
Her words touched me as if pushed by a wind,
Floating on currents straight into my heart,"

Very nice writing Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-12-28 06:33 AM

Thank you, JL, she's opened up a whole 'other world for the old guy.

You have two choices in life:
You can stay single and be miserable,
or get married and wish you were dead.

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

9 posted 2011-12-29 10:12 PM

...

oh...wow

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

10 posted 2011-12-29 10:23 PM

I take your "oh...wow" as a positive, Baby Girl. Again, I am thanking you for pleasuring me with your presence.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

bel1e
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11 posted 2011-12-29 10:24 PM

positive? that was my downright rapturous "oh wow" LOL....

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2011-12-29 10:33 PM

Haha! You are funny, Baby Girl. Thanks for being here . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

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Australia

13 posted 2011-12-30 04:41 AM

quote:
That's when my inner self began to glow,
Breathing her quintessence made my heart grow.

*sigh*

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia

14 posted 2011-12-30 05:18 AM

"Her words touched me as if pushed by a wind,
Floating on currents straight into my heart..."

Wonderful words here Jerr... you write so beautifully!

Happy New Year to you my friend

Bisous
RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JerryPat2
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Posts 16975
South Louisiana

15 posted 2011-12-30 07:49 AM

Thank you, tracie66, I appreciate your stopping by and commenting on my poem.

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Roniece, your kind words are nice to wake up to.Thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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