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OwlSA
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0 posted 2011-12-27 04:58 AM



LITTLE BELL
27 December 2011

You tiny sun-kissed, shadow-cooled,
yellow, Bauhinia tomentosa bell,
high above my forest floor,
frolicking in giggling harmony
with carefree, miniscule, camel-foot leaves,
to a backdrop of tree-fringed, blue-happy skies
your dance of joy choreographed
by a mischievous breeze of note,

you enchant my cheerful heart
and birth my summer delight.

Owl

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-12-27 05:31 AM


Oh, I am grateful to the little bell that enchants you in such a delightful way ... because the grace of the little bell is enchanting me too through your magical words, dear Owl!

Wonderful!

Margherita

OwlSA
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2 posted 2011-12-27 05:36 AM


Thank you,Margherita, for your kind words, and for the enchanting, magical grace of Margherita.

Owl

ice
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3 posted 2011-12-27 06:34 AM




Lovely poem, lovely flower.

You knew when I read this that I would have to research the flower, didn't you......:-)

OwlSA
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4 posted 2011-12-27 09:13 AM


Thank you, Ford for your comment and the photo.  Yes, giggles, I did know - and did you know that I put the name of the flower in especially for you, so that you could?

Owl

ice
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5 posted 2011-12-27 10:57 AM


LOL, at your reply to my reply.you flatter me.:-)
I grew up with nurserymen who would not allow me to speak plant names in any other than botanical terms..

An American sycamore was never a buttonwood, or plane tree, nor lace wood..it was always
"Platanus occidentalis"

Your comments prove that they served me well..
and besides... botanical terms fit well with serious poetry...such as what you have written here..

OwlSA
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6 posted 2011-12-27 11:14 AM


Ford, you don't know JUST HOW WELL they served you!  You have no idea (yet) what you have just done for me!  I only know the names of trees and plants indigenous to South Africa and I have a non-indigenous tree planted at the grave of my horse, Flicka, because the owner of the horse-farm would only allow one kind of tree.  Because it wasn't indigenous, I didn't know what its botanical name is - well, not until now!  It is a beautiful, huge, 9½ year-old Platanus occidentalis!  Thank you!

Owl

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7 posted 2011-12-27 05:57 PM


Thank you, Diana.  You bring color and warmth and summer to my black and white world.  Thank you, Ford, for bringing the picture to my brain.

xoxoxo
A

OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-12-27 06:16 PM


It is my pleasure, Alison, though I know there is infinite beauty in your black and white world, as I know you appreciate - but yes, I can well imagine that some colour would be a relief for the stark beauty.  I didn't even try to find a picture - firstly I don't know how to add a picture - and secondly, I knew Ford would oblige, lol!  

Owl

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