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Jane VanDoe
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0 posted 2011-12-20 11:46 AM



To Paul… whose words depict our times
within melodic runic rhymes
and woven lyrical designs

To Paul… your Tug of War in life
inspired you to pen Peace Pipes
for a world besieged with strife

To Paul… the idol of our youth
who sang of love in words of truth
and suffered much undue abuse

To Paul… whose music paved the way
for Sargent Pepper’s Band to play
and gave us dreams of Yesterday

To Paul… whose Wings taught us to fly
by granting hope and leave to try
with joy that begged to touch the sky

To Paul… whose sadness now we see
in loss of love through destiny
our prayer for him to Let It Be

© 1998 JVD

© Copyright 2011 Jane VanDoe - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2011-12-20 11:53 AM


Great tribute to an excellent musician.
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Jane VanDoe
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2 posted 2011-12-20 11:59 AM


Thank you so much... Paul is one in a billion... smiles... JVD
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2011-12-20 01:32 PM


Have you also written anything about Lennon?!

He certainly stated the penultimately classic 'self-prophesy' when
he once said "Life is what happens when we are making other plans"

Michael
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4 posted 2011-12-20 03:05 PM


I love your tributes.  Paul is a legend and this does him justice.  Enjoyed.

Michael

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5 posted 2011-12-20 04:26 PM


Your tributes are straight to the core
with truth and gracefulness. Thank you
so much for sharing them with all of us.


passing shadows
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6 posted 2011-12-20 04:28 PM


so well done! wonderful!
Jane VanDoe
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7 posted 2011-12-28 04:29 PM


Thank you so much... smiles... JVD
Jane VanDoe
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8 posted 2011-12-28 04:31 PM


I just love this guy and his music... a gift to us all... thank you... smiles... JVD
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