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Jane VanDoe
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0 posted 2011-12-18 09:17 PM




To Vincent... who will never know

The love I feel and cannot show
Of kaleidoscopes on linen snow

To Vincent... shaded as a fool
Whose isolation fractured rules
With genius crowned delusional

To Vincent... socially denied
Whose brilliance is immortalized
By majesty viewed through his eyes

To Vincent... dubbed an albatross
Who dwelled in dreams of splendor lost
Whose vision held a fatal cost

To Vincent... bathed in spectral light
Whose palette moved him to vast heights
Whose epic is A Starry Night

© 1986 JVD


© Copyright 2011 Jane VanDoe - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-12-18 09:25 PM


This is so good. I can't help but think of the song, "Vincent," by Don McLean as I read it. Although you delved into his problems and social standings, etc., it was as loving a piece of work as I have ever read on the man, and Jane VanDoe, there has been a lot of ink spilled about the man. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Jane VanDoe
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2 posted 2011-12-18 11:33 PM


Thank you so much... I love the guy and work ... the color and composition are so moving... he was truly an inspiration for all time... smiles... JVD
Margherita
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3 posted 2011-12-19 03:11 AM


To Vincent... bathed in spectral light
Whose palette moved him to vast heights
Whose epic is A Starry Night


Very beautiful first post! Welcome to Pip!

Margherita

Nicole
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4 posted 2011-12-19 07:07 AM


There's a fine line between genius and madness, and unfortunately the genius is only recognized after they are gone.  This is a lovely poem, welcome to PiP.  
Jane VanDoe
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5 posted 2011-12-19 08:58 AM


Thank you so much...smiles ... JVD
Jane VanDoe
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6 posted 2011-12-19 09:00 AM


Thank you so much for taking the time to comment... smiles... JVD
Sunshine
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7 posted 2011-12-19 09:41 AM


Jane, welcome to PiP!

Artists and poets who write in glory
of another are my favorite kind of person.

Welcome! Please, check your
email for a Very Special Greeting!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2011-12-19 11:17 AM


Well Ms. 'Jane VanDoe' ... this is a most special tribute to a grand-fine artist
[Van Gogh and Edward Hopper have always been my favorites.]

Welcome to the fine blue sands of "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea! [you will
find a lovely 'circle of friends' and literary talent here, methinks!]


Jane VanDoe
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9 posted 2011-12-19 12:08 PM


Thank you so much... appreciate the welcome... my favorite people are the greats... smiles... JVD
Jane VanDoe
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10 posted 2011-12-19 12:22 PM


Thank you so much Poe is one of my spiritual mentors... smiles... JVD
JL
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11 posted 2011-12-19 03:20 PM


Nice write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Jane VanDoe
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12 posted 2011-12-19 05:53 PM


Thank you... smiles... JVD
Marchmadness
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13 posted 2011-12-20 06:56 AM


van Gogh is smiling.
              Ida

Jane VanDoe
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14 posted 2011-12-20 11:22 AM


Thank you so much... I hope you're right... smiles back... JVD
suthern
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15 posted 2011-12-22 09:58 AM


Welcome to Passions! I love the Impressionists and particularly Van Gogh... this is a beautiful tribute!
Jane VanDoe
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16 posted 2011-12-22 03:18 PM


Thank you so much... just love his work... smiles JVD
secondhanddreampoet
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17 posted 2011-12-25 07:44 PM


Perhaps you might want to 'search' the archives sometime
and 'meet' another poet and Van Gogh admirer?!:

                         Vincent Memory

In breathless awe I stood, mere inches from your brushstrokes,
absorbing into the cells of my being
the palette knife textured green fields of Auvers.
I found myself wishing to be
at the Entrance To the Public Gardens of Arles,
reading the newspaper or sitting
upon a bench in the warm sunshine.

I cried.
My heartbeat skipped a beat,
then suspended itself within the moment,
feeling the presence of you in that museum room,
as if you had just stepped away from the easel
to examine your latest work of passion,
wet paintbrush and heart still in hand.
My entire body vibrated with your energy,
as the passion of your heart and soul flowed
into mine with each blade of color,
each stroke of life spreading itself
across the raw awaiting canvas.
I could do nothing but stare and breathe you in,
knowing this moment might have to last me
a lifetime.

Walking away from you left me lightheaded, Vincent.

Tomorrow I know I’ll wake up and breathe deeply
the memory of today’s encounter.
The textures, the depth, the emotional colors
that jumped from the canvas into my heart and soul
only make my love for your art more permanent.
This day will be embedded forever in my memory,
and my heart will forever beat
a grateful thank you,
Vincent van Gogh.
*

from a Jan 2004 Denver Art Museum visit

           --- midnitesun
               [Kathleen ('Kacy') Stafford]

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18 posted 2011-12-28 02:30 AM


I am really enjoying your poetry - like this one a lot.

Welcome to PiP.

xoxoxo
A

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