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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-12-17 10:31 AM

Early morning waking
with a longing hollow
wondering what
thief in the night
was breaking and entering
my dreams
ransacking
my sanctuary

LGR(C)12/17/11

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-12-17 08:15 PM

I think my dreams
need to talk to your dreams

because I know
who's entering mine...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-12-17 09:21 PM

Oh, it's our mind playing tricks! It's frustrating, I can relate. This is very nicely done, dear Lori.

Love,
Margherita

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2011-12-17 09:53 PM

I often wonder the same, waking up to the stranger that claims me, not knowing how and when.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2011-12-18 12:48 PM

I think Sunshine said it best, me too.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-12-18 06:14 PM

Ah, that isn't a good thing, huh?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2011-12-18 08:47 PM

Ah, I love dreaming - always dream, like feature length movies that I can stop and pick up the next night if it doesn't complete, and almost every dream I have has a beginning and and end...

Cool

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2011-12-20 10:03 AM

Thanks everybody for responding to this less than cheerful piece and forgive my lateness in saying thank you

Lori

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2011-12-20 04:36 PM

ah how I know this feeling lately

many bad dreams in my few hours of sleep

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2011-12-20 07:15 PM

Passing Shadows-((big hug)) Sending you much love

Lori

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2011-12-21 06:10 AM

another fine lil write, love it

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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