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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-12-15 09:09 PM


the mountains reared their might
sun spreading lengthening shadows
Gunslinger watched death of him
in the shadows, in the shadows dark

Love bested the Gunslinger's draw
with lovin', fine cookin', and a rawness
'tween the sheets he'd ever witnessed
Love was love, she was much more

six months three days, ten hours
since she'd drug him home half dead
shootin' hand busted, he'd gotten good
fast drawing and shootin' left-handed

not as good as the other hand, just
enough to get him killed one day
Love was pleased he let her love him
but watched intently his wandering eye

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

six more months one day, twelve hours
Love hanging wash on clothesline out back
Gunslinger snuck away as though a thief
walking, had to find himself a horse

Love came and watched Gunslinger leavin'
darted into the one-room shack, came back
totin' a buffalo gun, raised it to her shoulder
aimed, last second, turned gun away from him

Gunslinger flinched, waiting for another shot
that'd bring him down; room temperature
another blast and a buzzard fell from the sky
as it fell to the earth Love screamed mournfully

©December 15, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-12-16 08:18 AM


Jerry don't tell me this is going to be a cliff hangin' tear jerker.  It's all good my friend, very good.  
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-12-16 08:21 AM


Ah, it seemed to returning into that, huh, Lori. Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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