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Indigo Letter |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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INDIGO LETTER 15 December 2011 Secrets bared through glass darkly waft forest duets at dusk to the guitar strings of a melody of everlasting mind wills ache with dawn colours touching. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Quite simply magical, dear Owl! Love, Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Margherita. I am glad you could feel the magic with which it was written. Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
awesome poem, diana, intense and beautifully colored words that grip the heart, thanks for the superb moment, yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Yann, for your wonderful words which I appreciate very much. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You covered it all with this six-liner. Internal combustible and nature darkly and with choice wordplay. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I love how the brevity of the poem, makes it so full and poignant and complex. It is a full sensory experience, reading your poetry. I enjoyed this so much. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for reading, Jerry. I have no idea what you are saying nor do I understand your interpretation, but it sure was interesting trying to do both. Thank you, Nicole, for feeling and understanding essences of my poetry, even though it is obscure sometimes. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
love those: 'forest duets at dusk' and 'everlasting melodies ... with dawn colours touching' |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Love this---lyrical, almost Poe-like But not as dreary "mind wills ache with dawn colours touching." excellent |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Bruce. I am glad you do. Thank you, Ford. I am awed and honoured by such a compliment. Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you have enchanted and spoken mystery here Diana "waft forest duets at dusk to the guitar strings of a melody of everlasting" |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Kate. Owl |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Words written on velvet. xoxoxo A |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Alison, for your beautiful reply. Owl |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
These three December little gems were exquisite and enjoyed. jo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
just beautiful, Diana, Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Jo and Ida, for your kind words. Owl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
bravo! this is indeed touching  Love is the life of the soul... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Tracie. Owl |
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