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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-12-14 02:06 PM




Here
I have everything
I need
And everything
that needs me
is situated
and settled
as it can be
It runs on routine
like a well-oiled machine
Security
sans my dreams

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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-12-14 04:58 PM


Nice Lori.
"Security
sans my dreams"

(absent your dreams?)


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-12-14 07:41 PM


JL, So glad you asked...It is about getting out the old bucket list and getting real.


Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-12-15 11:35 PM


Well, dreams will usually out if the desire is there, Nice work, Lori,

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
4 posted 2011-12-16 09:21 AM


Nice compact poem that conveys meaning
Happy Holidays

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