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In The Twixt And Tween
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In The Twixt And Tween |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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In the twixt and tween of sleep and wake there is a place of hell or grace that can grasp your awareness away and take it to where it wants to play In the sunshine or the gray LGR(C)12/11/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
WoW! You hit the proverbial nail on the head with this poem, Lori. I've been laying awake, tossing and turning since 3:30 or earlier, finally just got up. The thoughts your mind takes you to in that semi-dreamland state can be very entertaining also. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-11-2011 07:50 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
It is all about trying to get up on the "right" side of the bed. Good mornig Jerry  Lori |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Yes JP, it is like a proverb.. You have to love poems like this, they make you think about your life..:-) Good job Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Ice...nice to know my word make people think Lori |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Kewl poem it nicely dipicts that place where we just begin to drift off into slumber.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, we have the choice. Beautifully expressed, dear Lori. Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Much insight in this poem, Lori, NICE Job. Ms. E |
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