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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-12-10 06:49 PM


The One Thing I Am Certain Of

Sometimes I want to say
"If you go away, then stay."
because I don't like the
uncertainy of the coming & going.
When she's here,
how long will she stay
before she goes away.
If she won't committ to staying
I have to accept her coming & going
or I can tell her
"The next time you leave, stay away."
Truthfully, I struggle with my
strengths and my weaknesses
but I don't want her to stay away
because I love her
and in this relationship
the one thing I am certain of
is my love for her, and isn't
that a good thing to be certain of?

JamesLee
07December
2011


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2011-12-10 11:24 PM


well.. if you are certain of that James, then the rest will fall into place.. nice writing.

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2011-12-13 01:31 PM


This has a child-like confusion to it   
certainty of love is a good thing!  enjoyed.
g

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-12-14 04:27 PM


"I love her
and in this relationship
the one thing I am certain of
is my love for her, and isn't
that a good thing to be certain of?"

Dilemma solved.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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