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Echo Bleu
Junior Member
since 2011-12-09
Posts 19


0 posted 2011-12-09 10:29 PM



Help me...

  Please, help me...

I can't breathe,

  I'm suffocating in my sleep...

This collar is choking me,

  The rope is to short...

Are you coming?

  Please hurry!

My breath is unsteady,

  My muscles ache...

Please, help me...

  Just help me...

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Echo Bleu
Junior Member
since 2011-12-09
Posts 19

1 posted 2011-12-09 10:36 PM


Um, I didn't have much to do when i thought this up and I don't think I was feeling real good at that moment either...
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2011-12-10 03:36 AM


The anxiety is powerfully felt here.
A nightmare for sure.

Margherita

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2011-12-13 01:24 PM


On my way girlie!!  
  

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
4 posted 2011-12-13 03:22 PM


wow .... sounds like you need an angel rescue mission let the angels do thy bidding for you !!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2011-12-15 10:10 AM


it was intended as a bracelet...grin (sorry, couldn't resist)
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