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Echo Bleu
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since 2011-12-09
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0 posted 2011-12-09 10:23 PM



I had a dream,

  You were in it...

I have this dream,

  Will you fulfill it?

I claim you as mine,

  Will you accept it?

I'll always love you,

  You'll have to accept it...

You can love me, too,

  I won't reject it!

Or you can hate me,

  My heart will hurt; but you won't break it...

I have this dream,

  It's for you to love me.

And guess what,

  I had a dream and you were in it!...



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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-12-10 03:39 AM


My heart will hurt; but you won't break it...


Lovely dream rendering. Dreams do manifest ... but in this case if it doesn't you have already wisely decided that your heart won't break. And that is very very important.

Wishing you well.

Margherita

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2012-02-25 06:44 PM


"My heart will hurt; but you won't break it..."

Your heart will hurt many times over my girl... Keep your feet on the ground and it will never fall far enough to break!  
Love you!
Mama

"...Never regret anything that made you smile..."

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