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Open Poetry #47

Some That Remain

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-12-09 06:06 PM

Some That Remain

Having joy
knowing pain,
experiencing a
multitude of feelings
some that come and go
and some that remain.
This is what love is...

JamesLee
06December
2011

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-12-09 06:12 PM

It looks like you are in perfect harmony with all the aspects of love, dear James.

Zen attitude I see here too.

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-12-09 06:33 PM

Yeah?
Maybe some that remained should have gone, and the ones that went should have remained...

Enjoyed your poem, Mr. James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2011-12-09 07:04 PM

Yeah, love it that and a thousand other descriptive phrases, my friend. Without it we perish, and sometimes with it we do the same.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-09-2011 10:59 PM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-12-09 10:14 PM

Well, stay or go, they certainly add spice to life, don't they. . .

kinda partially to the remaining one though.

j.

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