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My Song
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My Song |
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Echo Bleu Junior Member
since 2011-12-09
Posts 19 |
"My Song" by Joie Eglinger I can hear it, Each beautiful, little note. So silent and sweet, With joy in every beat...! I love the sound, The sound of this melody. It makes me feel alive, It gives me energy to survive! This piano under my fingers, I'll learn more to hear it's sound... My heart beats in time with the rhythm, My fingers dancing across the keys... I don't play just to hear this beauty, I play because I'm searching for a song... I'm searching, For my song... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! I very much enjoyed your first poetic offering! Your search for your song is beautifully expressed. Margherita  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Welcome to the blue pages. Keep tickling those keys. Enjoyed your Song... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, aren't we all searching for our song, Echo Bleu? I liked your song, welcome to PiP, may your stay here be peasant. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
That's my girl! Playing beautiful music And now a poet too!!  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
And the birds stopped singing, and listened . . . wanting to learn from you. Wonderful write, my friend - looking forward to more from you. j. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Welcom Echo Each poem you post is one note in the song you long to hear.. Keep writting so we can know the full melody..:-) enjoyed the poem |
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Freely_expressing Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69NSW, Australia |
Really Nice Love the musical metaphor  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Message! "The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Welcome to PIP. Enjoying your writing. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Welcome to PIP Echo, enjoyed your song, Ms. E |
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Echo Bleu Junior Member
since 2011-12-09
Posts 19 |
Thank you all for the compliments! I'll make sure to read of some of yours. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
welcome to passions great first post - I loved the imagery, well done! Love is the life of the soul... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
a warm welcome to PIP - this is a wonderful write, well done Love is the life of the soul... |
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