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Gunslinger's Walk
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Gunslinger's Walk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us Gunslinger's jaw ached, grittin' bad two cheaters; soon to be laid low Elijah, snake-in-the-grass, and Love easy to follow; sniff the wind; evil Elijah, once a partner turned bandit shot Millie, Gunslinger's horse dead moon bright casting his shadow, lean heart lay heavy with what was ahead prairie wind whistled over the foothills bending the tops of a moonlit boscage wolf howled hunter's conquering pride Gunslinger knew the feeling of the kill he understood bloodlust dark red spilt anger seethed within his bones; ante up Elijah and Love in his face they did spit cohort and lover their bones his to break the mountains where the wolf; his target desperado's hideout; Deadman's Gulch valley of Cougars Pass they'll endure fate three days walk; Gunslinger pushes hard ©December 7, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-08-2011 10:09 PM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
looks like things are fixin' to get ugly... real ugly. This is great I just can't wait for the next one. Write on Jerry!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah you right, Lori, things are about to come to a head. Thank you for being here in my world. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yeah! I think you are a screenwriter. Just need the music to go along with the show. Enjoying the western. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Jl, that is so funny. I have tried my hand at screenwriting, even have Final Draft on my computer, but the medium is too strange for an old novelist to comprehend. But thank you for the compliment. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-08-2011 03:18 PM).] |
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