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Just_little_Old_Me
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since 2011-11-24
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Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-12-05 05:08 PM



Bereave the stars
Of their bird's eye view
This wraithlike trance
Inaural beats induced
Shreds of truth crushed
By Cerberus' jaws beneath
The floodgates open
With unjarred answers you seek
Your third eye opened
Guidance through limitless boundaries
Strength lies within the astral plane
Shielded from Pandora's Box
For feebleminded are the meek...

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

© Copyright 2011 Jean-Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-12-05 05:12 PM


You touched base with all of the bedeviled, I do believe, Just_little_Old_Me. I was particularly found of "Cerberus' jaws."

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2011-12-05 07:52 PM


I like your style, I like this poem.
I feel like I read it on the banks of the Styx..that is what this type of poem does to me..I am there, and you are reciting..:-)

Michael
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3 posted 2011-12-06 06:26 PM


I really liked this, but would have to question if anyone is really ever "shielded" from Pandora's Box... or at least the calamity that arose from it?

Well done.


Michael

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-12-08 08:49 AM


Very impressive write, Jean-Philippe!

Excellent.

Margherita

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