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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-12-05 10:54 AM



Winter finds its way
down my neck
sending
shivers down my back
and
shoulders up to my ears
Huddling my heat
as I hurry my steps
to warm waiting doors

LGRĀ©12/5/11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-12-05 11:01 AM


And you just gotta know those doors are waiting for you. I feel this same way as you described from time to time, thank goodness for the warmth inside the doors.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-12-05 11:09 AM


Yeah!  Great write Lori.
I had to take out the trash this morning.
The door opening on the way back in was a welcome relief to the 27 degrees and 15 mile/hr wind and snow.
But I love it anyway...

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-12-05 11:09 AM


Seems no matter how well you bundle the icey air finds it's way in. Warm doors and the glow of light through inviting winter windows...makes the world seem a cozier place to be. Thanks for the read Jerry


Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-12-05 01:14 PM


Hey JL! Don't take long to Feeze yer Keester.  Thanks for the read.  Stay warm!


Lori


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