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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-26 08:35 AM

I think about you more than a little,
And I miss you when you're away,
A crease of worry deepens my brow,
Simply because you are worth it.

My liking you has turned inside out,
It's more personal now than then,
Don’t hardly remember all those days,
You weren't around to be nice to me.

I would like to lean into you,
Taste your mouth upon mine,
As we shared a sizzling embrace,
Grinding our hips into the other.

I don't like it that you are so far,
I'd like for you to be next door,
But miles of highway center lines,
Can't diminish the passion within.

I'd hate to know you were sad,
And I couldn't kiss away the blues,
And chase your worries all away,
That would rip my heart asunder.

I like your style, love who you are,
Teenage butterflies flutter within me,
Whenever we get a chance to speak,
You are making my days complete.

Thank you for being a part of me,
You have no idea what you've done,
Uplifted my life, gave it more pride,
You're my friend, my lover, my pal.

©November 18, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2011-11-26 10:07 AM

You dive into the ocean here, leaving no
trace of foam on the shoreline, just pure
heart and soul

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-26 10:19 AM

Thank you for your marvelous comments and the wonderful way you chose your words, EmmaRose.

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-11-26 10:45 AM

Jerry, I am so happy for YOU!

Lori

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

4 posted 2011-11-26 10:50 AM

..nothing like a heart lovingly
expressing himself/herself..bravo..!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-11-26 10:53 AM

quote:
Teenage butterflies flutter within me,

They seem to accompany us through life and stir when we nourish them with feelings of love. It is amazing.

Enjoyed this poem and love your pouring of grateful feelings and joy, dear Jerry.

You are blessed.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-11-26 11:11 AM

Thank you, Lori.

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Appreciate it, Spiros.

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Margherita, I agree with you very much.

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

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