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Just_little_Old_Me
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since 2011-11-24
Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

0 posted 2011-11-26 07:25 AM



Feverish a kiss so hot
It burns deeply into my heart
Forever a reminder
Never to be forgot

Intoxicating like lover's wine
Kindling passion as a perfect high
Just to touch you
Is divine

Painted by an Angel's brush
Surrendering sweetness
You were all I ever needed
I miss you so much

Hoping on a lovesong come true
I keep wishing on that star
For that little happy ending
Just for us two...

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

© Copyright 2011 Jean-Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2011-11-29 05:38 PM


Enjoyed...James
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2011-12-02 09:50 AM


"Intoxicating like lover's wine
Kindling passion as a perfect high
Just to touch you
Is divine"

Your poem is intoxicating.  Nice write!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2011-12-03 08:20 AM


Very beautiful, intense longing, dear Jean-Philippe.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-12-03 12:30 PM


You do love so well!

Lori

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