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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-11-25 11:18 PM



Crazy Love


Its one thing to feel lonely
when you are all alone,
its another to feel lonely
when you are with someone
and even though you are with them,
you still think of the one you miss,
the one you truly want to be with.
And someday perhaps you will,
but for now that someday
seems a long ways away...
I miss you Suzie Kim.

JamesLee
25November
2011

I wrote this after watching
the movie "Like Crazy".




[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-27-2011 11:36 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-11-25 11:27 PM


I hear you taking, it is not fair to the one you are with, but . . . But it is what it is . . .

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
  For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
  When they found him with the dead,--Wild

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2011-11-27 11:37 PM


Thanks Jerry, I wrote this after watching "Like Crazy".
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2011-11-30 07:13 AM


I still think of the one I miss too James... great writing :-)

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2011-11-30 09:23 AM


Ha!  Don't feel bad, my friend.  I still miss all my 'loves', from my first at 4 years old, till now.

One remembers the emotion - especially when one leaves while still in love, and loss is a rip of our very fabric, just as in death . . . and those fragments of another 'time' help mold who we are.

One doesn't have to miss or love the past any less than the present, but one does have to remember one's responsibility to living in the present, and for those whom love one today.

One has to live for today - not yesterday;
yesterday has to be the foundation upon which we plant our feet - a guide to Better our lives.

Good write,

j.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-11-30 11:15 AM


Nice writing James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2011-12-02 11:02 PM


upon refection, all 'love' seems rather crazy, methinks?!

nice 'write' !

Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member
since 2011-11-24
Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands
7 posted 2011-12-04 08:00 AM


No one controls what the heart wants, even if it might seem unfair! loved it!

Like Night needs Day
Good needs Evil
I need you to be complete...

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