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karren29
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since 2011-09-29
Posts 85
philippines

0 posted 2011-11-25 05:27 AM



You sing to me every night
Just before I close my eyes
You make everything feel right
Though I told you many lies

You hold my hand, you hold it tight
You say you're sorry on every fight
You kiss my lips, I close my eyes
Wishing you would realize

I don't love you
Do you see it too?
I don't like your hand touching mine
Boy, you're never on my mind

You take me to places I've never been
But I hate it when you touch my skin
I look in your eyes and see someone else's
I'm sorry but I never liked your kisses

I don't love you
You don't make my sky blue
I don't like it when you hold me close
Babe I'm still haunted by his ghost

I don't love you
I was never true
I said all you need to know
Now please let me go.........................

" u were never good enough for him or anything like me,
so u might as well sit back coz i aint trying to show maturity!!!!"

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2011-11-25 11:06 PM


Fine writing...perhaps if you show him this it will make things a little clearer...James
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