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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-21 07:00 PM


I found a place
That's full of grace
Not far from here
Lend me your ear
I shall explain
Its down a lane
A crooked road
Has no zip code
A Hideaway
Where we can stay
We'll have some fun
And when we're done
We'll go back home
Where we came from

©November 20, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-11-21 07:05 PM


But you're keeping "A Place to Go" a secret?
Intrigue.
Nice write Jerry.

JL  


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!


[This message has been edited by JL (11-22-2011 02:25 PM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-11-21 07:19 PM


Yes indeed, JL, I am most definitely keeping it a secret. Thank you for being here so often my friend.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
3 posted 2011-11-22 01:27 AM


Well, Fernando's is coming to mind.  I hear that song on an oldies station all the time.  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2011-11-22 05:44 AM


I knew it! I just knew it!

Lori

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
5 posted 2011-11-22 07:39 AM


Sorry, Klassy Lassy, Fernando's Hideaway isn't it. Good guess, but guess again.

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What You knew, Lori?

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead--Wilde ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2011-11-22 09:11 AM


Jerry has a happy place! Good for you my friend!
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
7 posted 2011-11-22 09:18 AM


Yes, indeed Lori, I now reside in a happy place . . .

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead--Wilde ~*~

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