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Open Poetry #47

in her own skin

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-11-21 10:19 AM

I watched her undress
like one watches the kitchen table fill
with dozens of meals each and every day

Her hair reminded me of
how I learned to run for hours, endlessly
How the sky would open up
as the light perished into a dust so grey
the caves of the far east welcomed its way

I watched her undress
until the tomatoes of the harvest began to rise
and the soil of the ground became so moist

Until she saw me rest my eyes upon her.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2011-11-22 05:16 PM

Like the myterious feel to this, leaving the
intent to the eye of the reader

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2011-11-22 06:36 PM

Nice...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2011-11-28 05:35 AM

Emma-

That's what I was striving for. Happy you noticed.

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2011-11-28 05:35 AM

Thanks, James...Take care

Cheers

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