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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-11-19 07:40 AM



Every day has its flow,
into tomorrow goes.
Your softness I can feel,
to me you're like a meal.
The long brown hair I touch,
makes me want you so much.
I sup your lips like wine
makes me glad I'm alive
You breathe softly in my ear,
its heaven you're so near
I await our next time,
perfumed letters . . . sublime.

©November 15, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-11-19 08:12 AM


How romantic Jerry!  Looks good on you my friend.


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-11-19 08:46 AM


It feels good on me too, Lori. Nothing like getting the old hormones stoked up . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

suthern
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3 posted 2011-11-19 09:50 AM


Yanno... a bit of confession... I've never sent a perfumed letter. But seeing how well they're received makes me smile... and hope yours continue to be treasured.
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-11-19 10:05 AM


Oh, they are treasured, no doubt about that. I don't know about other guys, guys don't really talk to each other about perfumed letters, but I like getting them. Very much.

Thanks suthern, I always look forward to your comments . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

martiniat8
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5 posted 2011-11-19 03:29 PM


tasty
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-11-19 03:59 PM


Thanks, martiniat8.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Margherita
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7 posted 2011-11-19 06:24 PM


It looks like you are in midst of a magical moment, Jerry!

So romantic, perfumed letters ... sublime.

Very lovely.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-11-19 07:02 PM


Yes, Margherita, I am in the midst of a magical moment, very much so. Thank you for your informative remarks.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JL
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9 posted 2011-11-19 07:55 PM


Well, I remember a few perfumed letters, from years ago.  Did I mention YEARS ago...
Bad thing was, I got them at mail call.  I was teased about that for months.
Enjoyed the recall.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2011-11-19 09:00 PM


Haha! Yeah, mail call would've been a bad time to get perfumed letters, JL. GI's can be unmerciful. Thanls for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2011-11-20 01:20 PM


Enjoy your love meals! May your plate never be empty!


Linda

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2011-11-20 01:48 PM


Thank you, Linda, and thank you twice and hoping my plate is always full . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Sunshine
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13 posted 2011-11-20 07:31 PM


Ah, you've inspired a poem...

now I have to go and write it.

Inspiration, your name is Poet, in the form of JP2


JerryPat2
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14 posted 2011-11-20 07:34 PM


I eagerly look forward to your poem, Sunshine, and thank you for reading and commenting on mine and getting a spark of inspiration from my words. That is a big PLUS to me.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2011-11-22 06:41 PM


Good one...James
JerryPat2
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16 posted 2011-11-22 06:52 PM


Thanks James . . .

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead--Wilde ~*~

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