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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2011-11-18 08:38 PM

Down silver white lanes,
love with us, walking
through an improbable white
dream, we close our
eyes,amber sun bathes,
blesses golden light onto
lids, that hold tears
of loves pride, welling
an inner stream to
cool and soothe hearts,
to bravely face all
that this wicked world
may throw toward us.
As one we shall overcome,
until love shines a new
feerlessly free, fragrant, path
down dawns future highway.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2011-11-18 10:13 PM

As one we shall overcome,
until love shines a new
feerlessly free, fragrant, path
down dawns future highway.

What a beautiful promise this is!! It's good to see you posting!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2011-11-19 08:25 AM

"to bravely face all
that this wicked world
may throw toward us."

couldn't have said it better~~

Good to see you and hope you are well.

M

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2011-11-19 05:46 PM

Inspirational piece. Enjoyed.

Michael

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-11-19 05:50 PM

Quite enchanting, dear Phil.

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-11-19 08:21 PM

Very nice, heartwarming.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2011-11-20 12:09 PM

Wonderful writing Phil.. :-)

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2011-11-20 02:19 AM

Great writing, Phil. Glad to see you writing again.
Ida

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2011-11-20 01:54 PM

Yes, "As one we shall overcome".

Phil, may your union keep you both strong in the face of all adversity.

Truly a 'love'ly piece of writing.

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

9 posted 2011-11-28 07:19 PM

"amber sun bathes,
blesses golden light onto
lids, that hold tears
of loves pride, welling
an inner stream to
cool and soothe hearts"

What beautiful phrasing, brings a smile & warm glow, like you wrapped your love around them. Lovely.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

10 posted 2011-12-02 01:44 PM

grand-fine Romanticism !!

(The part that 'naturegirl' already emphasized
is indeed most lovely writing)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2011-12-03 03:20 PM

Much enjoyed this, my friend...

j.

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