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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-11-18 07:48 AM

her body; intoxicating
springs from the earth, from earthen purity
pure femininity
seeps within her flowing beauty
like hot lava licks
into my thoughts and feelings
her lips open sensuously
passionately; the world stops breathing
I drink in her wondrous presence
reeling as a skid row wino
with a full jug of Mad Dog 20-20
she enchants my very fiber
she glides rather than walks
in my dreams
while I touch her extraterrestrial peaks and valleys
I shiver
with forethought
hearing her laughter
sounds like the uncorking of
dozens of wine bottles
my intensity builds
I sup from earthen springs
then to her throat, give it a wet kiss
before moving to a spot
her sensuous weakness
and mummer into the the nape of her neck
fevorishy, happily
her happy squeals
come from the spring of her womanhood
the heavens
collapse, sending planets and stars
plummeting toward the earth
toward the earth mother
as I catch their presence within her essence
of continuous energy
I gasp
completely in rapture by now
our bodies heaving with and against
each other, and more so
with our uneven breath
we cling to each other for support and pleasure
now I am totally drunk
from her nectar
and we lie comatose"
as I inhale her earthen perfume

©November 12, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-18-2011 11:22 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-11-18 08:10 AM

Hot stuff Jerry! I love the drunken metaphor.
Sounds like the two of you really tied one on. From the sounds of it there are a couple of smiles floating around. Great write my friend

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-18 08:40 AM

You'd better believe it, Lori my friend, smiles are definitely going 'round.

Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Just_little_Old_Me
Junior Member

since 2011-11-24

Posts 40
Roermond, The Netherlands

3 posted 2011-11-24 04:14 PM

love drunk with passion... Best feeling in the world isn't it?
Very beautiful poem!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-11-24 04:16 PM

Yep, best feeling in the world is ab-so-lutely correct, Just_little_Old_Me. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry . . .

~*~ He did not wear his scarlet coat,
For blood and wine are red,
And blood and wine were on his hands
When they found him with the dead,--Wild

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