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Open Poetry #47

Love On Pause

g7
Junior Member

since 2011-11-15

Posts 20

0 posted 2011-11-17 03:59 PM

Paint my heart in colors
that find their light in you.
Breathe into my life
the tints and hues,
reflections of love waiting to be made.

Linger on my skin,
lips of satin, breath of heaven;
your hands around my heart;
molding, kneading, blending
the melodies I have longed to sing

Of love hoped for, now found
in the corners of your smile;
of the fire in your eyes;
of my hands that leave you breathless,
lost in the scents of love in the making.

Reach for me, you will find me;
strain to touch me, I am already there.
I will not disappoint.
'Round this love I draw a circle
in your favorite shade of purple
And give to you the garden of my heart.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-11-17 04:14 PM

I'm an all day sucker
for romantic poems...
and this one stuck to me,
right away.

Beautiful work!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2011-11-17 05:27 PM

This is absolutely lovely!!

g7
Junior Member

since 2011-11-15

Posts 20

3 posted 2011-11-17 07:12 PM

thanks. am getting married saturday. i wrote this for my wife.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-11-18 11:10 AM

Congratulations!! I wish you both every happiness... she's sure to love this!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-11-18 04:34 PM

Absolute beauty!
Congratulations.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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