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Amberzlynnc
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0 posted 2011-11-16 06:37 PM



You entered me and the tears slid gently down my face.
The wetness on my cheeks was disguised by the night-filled room.
My sounds of sadness were taken as those of desire.

Love was not entirely there.

If not absent from my heart, then where?

*Amber

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-11-17 06:33 AM


So sad. We have the freedom to not pretend, dear Amber.

You render your feelings with great sensitivity and skill.

Margherita

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