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Open Poetry #47

Fantasy of a Man

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2011-11-15 03:52 PM

Fantasy of a Man

Within your skin
Beauty shines
Below the surface
Looking thru eyes
Into mine
Grabbing hearts
Bonding each other`
Beyound places of
Sky clouds
Into the star's
Of togethereness love
Creating never-ending galaxies
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Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (11-16-2011 07:08 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-11-16 07:10 PM

Oh this is very pretty, all starry eyed and dreamlike.

Nice!!

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2011-11-17 12:25 PM

thank you BluesSerenade

mvvenkataraman
Member

since 2011-11-12

Posts 72
India

3 posted 2011-11-17 08:20 AM

Dear respected bslicker,

Your poem reminds me drizzling
With wonderful words falling
To cool down all my emotions,
I now acknowledge your ideas
As they tell about only facts,
You have marvelously expressed.

With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2011-11-19 03:00 AM

Thank you very much mvvenkataraman

bernie

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2011-11-25 11:07 PM

Nice...James

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