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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-15 07:13 AM



I know your day
was a hard one
That machine 'bout
beat you to death
You gotta be
achin' all over
So I've been thinkin'
'bout what'd make you
feel better
A long hot shower
to start
If you want
I can wash your back
Then I lovingly recommend
a back rub
You know the ones
where you get rubbed
to heaven or oblivion


LGR(C)11/15/11


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1 posted 2011-11-15 07:24 AM


Ah, the images you create....very nice, Lori!
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-11-15 07:49 AM


Sounds like a winner to me.

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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2011-11-15 07:36 PM


Now you're the kind of woman a man wants to come home to!


Linda

JL
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4 posted 2011-11-15 09:50 PM


Very nice writing, Lori.
Enjoyed!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
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5 posted 2011-11-16 10:52 AM


Smiling to your words and to Linda's reply. Oh-yeah-do-that-baby ... must have been the reaction!

Relaxing and stirring all at once.

Margherita


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-11-16 05:55 PM


Very nice...James
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7 posted 2011-11-17 12:27 PM


LOL... Who could resist?? That sounds like a great way to spend the evening... whether giving or receiving!
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