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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-14 10:30 AM



Heartsleeve put on
that little black dress
the one she calls
lonely
accessorized with
her favorite
look at me’s
and finished off
with a spritz
of come hither
She was steppin’ out
in her sweep me
off my feet shoes

LGR©11/14/11

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-11-14 10:38 AM


. . . and it's about time Heartsleeve stepped out . . . and she is lovely, no doubt about it . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-11-14 10:41 AM


Thought I'd blow the dust off her and run her up the flag pole.  Thanks for your complimentary comment Jerry

Lori

Sunshine
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3 posted 2011-11-14 01:28 PM


She's so pretty
when she's out walking...




suthern
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4 posted 2011-11-14 01:32 PM


She sure does look fine!
Michael
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5 posted 2011-11-14 02:09 PM


Go gettum girl!
Michael

jwesley
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6 posted 2011-11-14 02:47 PM


Saw her last night standing under the street lamp. . .     waiting for the bus.

She's a looker alright.

j.

tracie66
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7 posted 2011-11-15 04:39 AM


I love this, great imagery

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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