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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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psst! whatcha doing over there huh? brought yo'self over heah I got sumtin' to told you; that being . . . how's about you squandering a few hours, minutes with me huh? why-don'ja? we got nothing but time on our side how 'bout let's squander some of it together? I need my fire lit did you bring the necessary equipment for starting 'em? ah, you always have that with you, huh? that's what I thought so whatcha say wanna get loose together? take our own sweet time who's to know? who's to care? you're here, so am I ain't natural we don’t get something started heck, we might even put the fire out and have to reheat, give it another charge come on, sweet thing fan my flame . . . ©November 11, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
now that is an invitation! Love the way you extended it! Great job Jerry!  Lori |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loving it as I'm laughing . . . my friend... GOOD WRITE! j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Much obliged, Lori, glad you liked my little bit of fun and frolic . . . <><> jwesley, hell I was laughing as I wrote the darn thing. Thanks. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I worked with a woman from Louisiana a few years ago. This sounds just like her. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yeah, actually I didn't get too heavy on the Cajun slang language, Ida, nobody would have known what I was saying. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-12-2011 12:44 PM).] |
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