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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-11-11 09:27 AM





Held together by
God only knows
what kind of glue
keeps my fractured fragile
together when
I’m at my end
of understanding
and my bewildered
is berated by
an unforgiving
intellect


LGR©11/11/11

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-11-11 09:41 AM


That sounds bad, Lori, but I know you will come to terms with whatever is fracturing your fragile.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-11-11 09:57 AM


I'm forever beating myself up over one thing or another....  You are right my friend I will come through okay, I reserve whining rights in the process (lol)  Thanks for being here Jerry.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2011-11-15 09:35 PM


So come over for coffee...

we'll talk.

I miss you.


JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2011-11-15 09:46 PM


I love this!  Makes more sense than most do, including me.

I'm with Sunshine.  Conversation over hot coffee.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2011-11-17 02:50 AM


I know that feeling.
               ida

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
6 posted 2011-11-17 02:55 AM


deep feelings... chin up
suthern
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Louisiana
7 posted 2011-11-18 10:52 AM


I liked this when I first read it... now I'm living it... and you wrote it so well!
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