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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-10 10:54 AM



laying back upon
your spent
in my splendor
breathing easing
slowly together
into a contented sigh

LGR(C)11/10/11

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2011-11-10 11:21 AM


and my hubby won't be home till Monday?

I don't know if I can bear reading you anymore till then

LOL

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-11-10 11:57 AM


What a great compliment! Hey, my words will wait!  Here is to you having a perfect Monday!
Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-11-10 12:05 PM


Oh, Lori, you do know how to turn a phrase . . . THIS is delicious . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-11-10 12:08 PM


I'm happy you found this to be a treat Jerry.  Thanks for letting me know !

Lori

Michael
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5 posted 2011-11-10 01:19 PM


Now that's an image I can picture in mind and hold on to.

Beautiful words, Lori.
Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-11-10 01:27 PM


Thanks Michael, I'm very glad you liked it!

Lori

tracie66
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7 posted 2011-11-13 04:27 AM


small write but big on imagery, well done  

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (11-13-2011 09:29 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2011-11-14 08:40 AM


Tracie66 thanks for stopping by and giviing me a read, glad you liked it!

Lori

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