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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-09 10:52 PM




Tears slip
helpless
at the mercy of
my too tender heart
dripping off the chin
I led with

LGR(C)11/9/11

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-11-09 11:17 PM


That makes me sad to hear this.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

HiddenHero
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2 posted 2011-11-09 11:38 PM


How true... the softest hearts break easily, but are still the strongest.

The Hero Hidden Within Us All!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2011-11-10 05:29 AM


just sending you some of my butterfly hugs Lori.. you are not alone.. hope your sadness eases soon. Very nicely expressed.

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Michael
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4 posted 2011-11-10 12:45 PM


This one grips you with its sadness.  You do melancholy well.  Now, here's a (hug) from me... not that it would ever make up for the many you have given me.  
Michael

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5 posted 2011-11-10 03:01 PM


In case you could use another hug, I'm in line with arms open.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-11-10 03:26 PM


Thanks everybody for all the hugs and support.  Not to worry, I cry at the drop of a hat.  All better now!  

Lori

Margherita
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7 posted 2011-11-11 05:28 AM


Perfect ouverture to the birth of new smiles.

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2011-11-11 08:28 AM


Quite right Margherita! Thank you!

Lori

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9 posted 2011-11-11 10:42 AM


Recently, for someone who "rarely cries"
I find the simplest of things thought upon
bring tears...

I need to buy stock in Kleenex.




Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2011-11-11 10:49 AM


Maybe we need to take in a chick flick and get it out of our system


Lori

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11 posted 2011-11-11 10:52 AM


You're on!

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