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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-11-09 10:39 AM


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There are autumn leaves
Still on the forest branches
Yet the ground below their shadows
Is covered with winter snow

A small stream frozen at its edges
Wanders past a wooden cabin
From whose chimney a slender
Curl of smoke rises in the air

Two candles flicker in a large
Bay window  A pair of cats
Sit upon the sill

The sun slowly going casts
It all in tones of red and blue
You look at me  I look at you


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2011-11-09 02:28 PM


Winter at it's finest. Sets a lovely mood.
                                  Ida

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2011-11-09 02:29 PM


Winter at it's finest. Sets a lovely mood.
                                 Ida

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-11-09 04:11 PM


Ditto.

Ditto.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2011-11-09 06:41 PM


Ranks with the best of the imagist poets.
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