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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2011-11-09 02:48 AM



Heart glad
Heart sings
Heart beats
to the tune of your drum
and for that
I am thankful



Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2011 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2011-11-09 05:17 AM


And my heart is glad too, that your heart sings, dear Roniece.

This is very lovely.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-11-09 07:54 AM


As we should all be thankful for the different heartbeats. Although, it is when we discover another heart which beats as one with ours is the ultimate. Your poem points out many possibilities.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2011-11-09 06:48 PM


Nice...James
tracie66
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4 posted 2011-11-15 04:36 AM


so very sweet this little write

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



JL
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5 posted 2011-11-15 10:11 PM


Great write.
Hoping the drumming continues.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Larry C
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6 posted 2011-11-30 10:23 PM


Would that be the different drummer? Very nice.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kethry D
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7 posted 2011-12-01 01:37 PM


I could feel the beat of this one.

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

jwesley
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8 posted 2011-12-07 08:11 PM


Sounds just like me every morning when my feet hit the floor...

wonderful,

j.

Honeybunch
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9 posted 2011-12-08 06:20 PM


Lovely little gem, Roniece.

Helen

The Lady
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10 posted 2011-12-14 12:12 PM





hmmmm... this makes me feel happy Roniece!

nicely done!


hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2012-01-06 02:07 PM


this just makes me smile

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

secondhanddreampoet
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12 posted 2012-01-07 03:44 PM


cute 'write' (finely succinct) !
Marchmadness
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13 posted 2012-01-08 05:43 AM


Enjoyed, Roniece.
              Ida

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