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poemfaner
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0 posted 2011-11-08 06:02 PM



Hi every one , I have two poems here , enjoy.

One Four And More

Here I am to start what I came for
Telling my story from one to four
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One goal I have lived my whole life for
Searching for luxury, richness and more
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Two decades, twenty years of war
Keeping try knocking the door
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Three months ago I was at the store
Bying some things I came for
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Four people with weapons, they smell gore
Trying to take the moneybox, they want more
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One bullet out with a big bore
Flying on aire, touched my core
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Two heart surgeries, so sore
Being alone in room, I tore
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Three things I know so for
Being alive, healthy and safe is all
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Four times you think and more
We all have better than what we look for


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Words Damage

I remember someone, calling me a rust
Apologizing later on, my ears were closed
The damage was done, my life was lost

Telling this story to even a nun, laugh is a must
Saying no joke man, it's nothing more than just...
Watching tragedy is fun, living it makes soul going bust


Some words spelt down, reduce life to simple dust
Cause dreams to be mown, despair growing fast
Make Heart as a stone, losing all whole lust

I decided on my own, to not make it last
Taking lesson from this one, Change is a must
This is a new dawn, making my horizon so vast

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1 posted 2011-11-09 02:46 PM


Welcome to Passions!!
Margherita
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2 posted 2011-11-12 08:40 AM


Welcome to Passions!

I think you have learned two very important lessons. You expressed your thoughts very well here.

Please, in the future post only one poem at the time. You can post a total of three poems every day (please read the rules). And please enter the spirit of this beautiful Poetry site also by reading and commenting on other poems, that will also give us the opportunity to know you better.

Margherita

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