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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-07 06:14 PM




Once when I was thinking
about things simple and small
The somethings and nothings
of it all

The ying yangishness of
let there be light

The on offishness of binary

The vibration of becoming
neither here nor there
infinitely


The enormity of the universe
compared to a grain of sand  
feeling so insignificant
until I began
to realize
how significant it becomes
when that grain of sand
is in your eyes

LGR(C)11/7/11  

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-11-07 06:25 PM


Big time theorizing being done here, Lori. When you get your thinking cap on, you are dynamite. Darn that grain of sand anyway. Favorite piece of the pie was the line, "The on offishness of binary."

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (11-07-2011 10:51 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-11-07 06:38 PM


Thanks Jerry, I was hoping it made sense to more than just me.

Lori

JL
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3 posted 2011-11-08 12:02 PM


"how significant it becomes
when that grain of sand
is in your eyes"

Great contrast.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-11-08 08:37 AM


Thanks JL I appreciate you being here

Lori

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2011-11-11 10:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
Sunshine
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6 posted 2011-11-11 10:18 PM


quote:
The enormity of the universe
compared to a grain of sand


Wow!

This line
stands against time!



passing shadows
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7 posted 2011-11-11 10:21 PM


beautiful!

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-11-12 07:49 AM


You develop your thinking process here very powerfully, dear Lori.

I agree.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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9 posted 2011-11-12 08:17 AM


Thanks for reading this one Margherita, I hoped you would.

Lori

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