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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2011-11-07 06:46 AM


I wrote these words after my Mom visited me in a dream on the eve of her passing...  


Dear Mom,

Another anniversay of your passing
another day when my thoughts have been of you

You were in my dreams last night
looking beautiful as ever

You hugged me warmly
and told me all would be well

The warmth of your hug
has been with me all day

I will carry that with me
until you visit again


love
Roniece


© 2011 Roniece.com



Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2011 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-11-07 07:06 AM


Thinking of you on this sad day.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2011-11-07 07:14 AM


merci beaucoup Jerr... appreciate you!

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

suthern
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3 posted 2011-11-07 09:04 AM


Facing my own anniversaries, I know how precious such visits are... Beautiful write!
Margherita
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4 posted 2011-11-07 09:19 AM


So very beautiful, dear Roniece, and I so deeply relate. I adore it when my own Mom visits in dreams. She was and still is the one who comforts me and sustains me.

Hugs.
Margherita

Sunshine
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5 posted 2011-11-07 09:54 AM


Those silent hugs are very tangible, aren't
they? I wish you more.




Marchmadness
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6 posted 2011-11-07 11:49 AM


So sad and yet poignantly beautiful, Roniece.
                          Ida
                

EmmaRose
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7 posted 2011-11-07 12:58 PM


You are blessed to think of your dear Mom in such high regard, when many don't appreciate enough who they have in their lives.
JL
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8 posted 2011-11-08 12:04 PM


Now this is precious!

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2011-11-11 10:08 PM


Wonderful...James
jwesley
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10 posted 2011-11-12 07:44 AM


Mine's still here - and healthy, considering. At 86 she still says she can whip my uh-huh - I do not argue the point, don't want to embarrass myself.

I do somewhat plan for the day I know is coming though, and the missing that's going to rock my universe.

Advanced readings of pieces like yours, I think, will help me bridge that gap, spiritually.

I thank you for that.

j.

tracie66
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11 posted 2011-12-22 05:25 AM


this is so precious, thanks for sharing

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



tracie66
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12 posted 2011-12-23 12:32 PM


this is so beautifully written, I read it over & over - thanks for sharing.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



Marchmadness
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13 posted 2011-12-23 11:49 PM


This brought tears to my eyes, Roniece.
                                    Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2011-12-25 01:00 PM


a fine 'write' indeed!
2islander2
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15 posted 2011-12-26 03:11 PM


Hello roniece, keep her in memories and grace of your thoughts and words, such a beautiful poem is part of her,


yann

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