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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2011-11-07 06:39 AM


I write forgetting
what I write
who knows I may have
written this before!
but whatever I write
I hope that
somewhere
sometime
my words
will be read
by someone
in a far off land
and
somewhere
sometime
someone
may smile

and because of this
I will continue to write...


© 2011 Roniece.com

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (11-09-2011 02:34 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-11-07 07:08 AM


A romantic's view of the world is this tender poetry, Roniece. I am smiling.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2011-11-07 07:16 AM


you have smiled my evening Jerr! Merci!

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2011-11-07 09:22 AM


I love your reflections, dear Roniece. Poetic words from the heart are always a wonderful gift. So, yes, write on!

Margherita

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
4 posted 2011-11-07 09:48 AM


I like this.  

Juju

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-11-07 11:57 PM




Great write!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2011-11-08 05:15 AM


Thanks everyone, really appreciate your comments on my work..

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2011-11-08 10:17 AM


I share your sentiments. Nice write!

Lori

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2011-11-08 02:36 PM


Right on! Write on! ~ and you'll always bring me smiles in this far-off land!

Love 'n hugs,
Linda Lou

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
9 posted 2011-11-08 03:59 PM


I am in Prague, I read and I smiled
Michael
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10 posted 2011-11-08 05:16 PM


The words of the poet will live on forever... and that is a wish we all probably share at least on some level.

Beautifull emotion.


Michael


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