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serenity blaze
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0 posted 11-07-2011 03:45 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

My smile

my teeth

might fall in flank

nightmare's clench

could fleck and sprout

gums of loose roots in my mouth:

My teeth could fall in flank.


My hair might frizzle

and reside

in clover burrs caught in my brush

in waft to floor in spiral sighs

as I scrape my scalp for shine.

I might be vigorous in vain-

and crusty scabs leave their cremain

in silver combs, with pearl.


My eyes of blue will search for you.

My ears will tune to hear your voice.


I'll sponge my aged skin

(so thin)

with talcum

sprinkled over cream--

smeared in circles

that I feared

when I was young

and I wrote this

and music was my very name--

a signature

upon your lips?

Tremolo in

three quarter time.


Remember me.

Remember, this--

"I love you, love."

And numbers wish

to be so misaligned.


© Copyright 2011 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 11-07-2011 03:57 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Serenity... you always will be remembered by me lovely!

Awesome writing...

Bisous
RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ice
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2 posted 11-07-2011 06:50 AM       View Profile for ice   Email ice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ice

Excellent...reminds me of the feel of silk, and sipping Tia Maria...very smooth, and enjoyable.
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3 posted 11-07-2011 09:02 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

My eyes of blue will search for you.

My ears will tune to hear your voice.


I'll sponge my aged skin

(so thin)

with talcum

sprinkled over cream--

smeared in circles

that I feared

when I was young

and I wrote this

and music was my very name--


You have the ability to go straight to my heart with your words... you may write your life, but oh, it touches mine. And because it does, I can say with conviction... remembering is guaranteed.
Margherita
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Eternity


4 posted 11-07-2011 10:27 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

The music never stops, as you demonstrate so very well, dear Karen!

Impressive and poignant.

Margherita
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Listening to every heart


5 posted 11-07-2011 07:52 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

quote:
And numbers wish

to be so misaligned.


This year, I will be [0]6
Next year, I will be 16 again...

Then the next year 26...

then the year after that, 36...

and in those three years,
I will know how swiftly
the first three decades
truly passed...

because I am still there
at any given time of day.

Sending my love, lovie.




JL
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6 posted 11-07-2011 11:42 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

""I love you, love.""

In 3/4 time.
Trill and vibrato.

Enjoyed your write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


7 posted 08-10-2012 01:40 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

oh..oh...yes...YES...i have missed reading You
 
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