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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2011-11-04 10:33 AM


Warmer Places


Once upon a time
The wind carried the warm breeze

Under my downed wings
I felt the sun warm my back

The calm sea beneath
Paved my way home with bright light

And I madly chased
The dawns twilight reflected


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2011 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2011-11-04 04:06 PM


Even if you never caught it, the chase sounds like a wonderful place to be for awhile.  Beautiful imagery.


Michael

JL
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2 posted 2011-11-04 06:16 PM


Time has a way of seeming fleeting, well, when we look back in our short time in living.

Enjoyed your reflecting.

JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2011-11-07 05:51 AM


Beautiful!!

Bisous
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2011-11-07 09:05 AM


This is wonderful, dear Juju. It felt like being myself a bird while reading it.

And ... Happy Birthday, dear Juju! May it unfold to your full happiness and joy.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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5 posted 2011-11-07 09:08 AM


Isn't that the way it is in many cases, Juju. When all looks hopeless a light shows us the way. Like this.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2011-11-07 09:51 AM


Thank you for wishing me a happy birthday

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2011-11-07 12:11 PM


One of your best, Juju.
                   Ida

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