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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-11-03 09:36 PM



Let's take off our overcoats
and hang them on the wall
while we're at it
let's take off our skins and all
and in our essence be
then chat a bit
about synchronicity

LGR(C)11/3/11



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2011-11-03 09:51 PM


I can say thumbs up to synchronicity, Lori. Every thing being equal, twice not removed  is nice. Heavy bit of poetry here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2011-11-03 09:58 PM


Well thank you very much for the nod on the depth Jerry.

Lori

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-11-04 06:05 AM


Love your going into the depth about synchronicity.

Unencumbered at the level of our essence things can be perfectly perceived. Well expressed!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-11-04 06:14 AM


Margherita knew you would catch this train of thought as well, thanks for your always kind words.

Lori

JL
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5 posted 2011-11-04 10:11 PM


Synchronicity???
Deep into the mind??  Well, that could be a very scary place to go.
Especially with me, a lot of cobwebs, and empty chambers.  And if you
speak too loud all you get is echoes…

Just kidding with you!!!

I really enjoyed this write.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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