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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2011-11-01 08:23 PM


I ask my self more often-
With every passing year...
The point of my existence,
What am I doing here?

Nobody ever thought that I
Would live to twenty-five...
That was over thirty years ago
And somehow I survive.

Survival isn't living
I guess it's marking time-
I try to ease another's load-
By giving them my rhyme.

People often ask me-
What's true? and what is not?
To be completely honest-
I guess that I forgot...

I've lived a lot of what I write-
I've known a lot of pain-
I've known the feel of hunger-
And sleeping in the rain.

I've seen my share of country-
Experienced some grief.
I know a bit of heartache-
And bitter unbelief...

If I must be identified...
Then this is where I stand-
I am your conscience, and your guide:
I guess I'm "Every Man".



© Copyright 2011 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-11-01 10:29 PM


Yep.  No doubt you are.
Nice write
Thanks for the insight.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 2011-11-01 11:54 PM


I try to ease another's load-
By giving them my rhyme.

That you do, my friend... that you do... thank you! *S*

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2011-11-02 03:51 AM


Glad to see you back with a rhyme to ease the load, John.
                             Ida

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 2011-11-02 05:10 PM


You speak for every man wonderfully, and yet many, many only wish they could speak as you do.  I truly love your writing.


Michael

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2011-11-06 08:09 PM


Fine writing...James
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